I HAVE PULLED EEK FROM FANFICTION.NET
I APOLOGIZE BUT AN AUTHOR CAN ONLY TAKE SO MUCH EDITING!
NOW FOR THOSE FOLLOWING THIS
I HAVE BEEN SENT TO THE WHIPPING BENCH!
I WAS RECENTLY CALLED OUT ON A PROMISE I MADE AND FOUND THAT I SCREWED UP AND HAVE SUBJECTED one OF MY READERS TO MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER OF EDWARD BEING A SUBMISSIVE...WITH THAT BEING SAID I AM GOING TO GO BACK AND REWRITE MISTRESS ISABELLA AND ADD EDWARD'S POINT OF VIEW FOR THAT one PERSON THAT TOOK THE TIME TO SEND ME MY 535TH REVIEW ON FANFICTION.
I APOLOGIZE TO THE THOUSANDS OF READERS I HAVE BUT I AM ONE THAT STAYS TRUE TO MY WORD AND I DID SAY IT AND SHE CALLED ME OUT ON IT, THAT EDWARD WOULD ONLY BE IN THE PLAYROOM ONCE. YOU WILL ALL HAVE TO GO BACK TO THE LAST CHAPTER THEN ON THE NEXT UPDATE FROM NOW WHICH WILL BE LONGER THAN USUAL BECAUSE I HAVE TO REWRITE THAT CHAPTER FOR HER SO I AM NOT LABELED A LIAR.
I HONOR EVERYONE OF MY REVIEWS AND I WILL CONTINUE TO DO SO.
WITH THAT BEING SAID THOUGH I AM ALSO ADDING A NOTE HERE AS WELL.
BECAUSE SOMETIMES THINGS HAPPEN AND YOU JUST CANT TAKE BACK WHAT YOU PROMISE. LESSON LEARNED.
I LOVE AND RESPECT EVERYONE OF YOU AND I WANT TO CONTINUE TO MAKE EVERYONE HAPPY. I KNOW SOMEONE TOLD ME YOU CANT MAKE EVERYONE HAPPY. WELL I SURE AS HELL CAN TRY NOW CAN'T I? JUST WATCH ME!
I LOVE A CHALLENGE AND AM BOUND TO MY STORY
YES I WILL ADMIT THAT I AM A LITTLE MIFFED AT THIS REVIEWER CONSIDERING SHE HAS ONLY GIVEN ME TWO REVIEWS AND CHASTISED MY BELLA FOR HAVING AN ATTITUDE SHE DIDN'T SEEM WAS APPROPRIATE ACTIONS EVEN THOUGH BELLA HAS NOT BEEN PROPERLY TRAINED AS A SUB AND HAD ZERO EXPERIENCE. THE FUNNY THING IS I AM NOT EVEN FAVORITED AS A STORY. SO WHY WOULD I GO THROUGH THIS FOR THIS PERSON?
THE THINGS I GO THROUGH TO PLEASE PEOPLE OBVIOUSLY SCREAMS
SUBMISSIVE
DOESN'T IT?
BUT THIS "SUBMISSIVE AUTHOR" WILL ONLY TAKE SO MUCH OF A TONGUE LASHING BEFORE SHE TURNS AROUND AND BITES BACK.
REST ASSURED YOU....I WILL DRAW BLOOD AND I WONT HESITATE TO DRINK IT AND SMILE WHEN I DO!
*bloodfreak remember...I believe I mentioned that in a previous authors note.
REST ASSURED YOU....I WILL DRAW BLOOD AND I WONT HESITATE TO DRINK IT AND SMILE WHEN I DO!
*bloodfreak remember...I believe I mentioned that in a previous authors note.
I back you 100% you should not change your story for a promise you made. I think things change and people need to understand that this is YOUR story. Not all reviews are rainbows and sunshine and I have given a few of some not so nice reviews but I believe it will help authors grow. I DO NOT believe in ANYONE harrassing an author simply because they made a promise but ended up changing the way the story was going. This is YOUR story. So please dont try to please everyone, it will only make you pist off and you might end up not righting at all. I have known an author to do that and she actually lost a huge amount of respect from a lot of people because she let what few bad apples out there ruin it for all of us. Now she wont even write anymore. So please just enjoy your story and ignore the idiots.
ReplyDeleteOh I forgot to ask, I was a little confusde as to which chapter you were re-writing. Are you redoing chapter 45 Mistress Isabella????? Or did you mean the next chapter 46 Edwards Punishment???
ReplyDeleteThough I always feel the author writes for me alone :) I would never expect a chapter to be redone based on a review. I have been following your story from the start and like it very much. That's not to say I like some chapters better than others, but for any reviewer to comment in that manner is absurb. If I am not dazzeled by a chapter or it's not what I expected, I just skip ahead and go on to the next chapter or wait it out. The story is in your head, not mine. I am just following you and enjoying your tail...Kudos to you for sticking to your guns!!! Looking forward to more!!
ReplyDeleteI hate to see that you are rewriting YOUR story due to a commenter. It is YOUR story, not anyone elses. So you decided to change it, it is YOURS to change. I hate reading stories and the writers want to know where the readers think the story should go. It is up to the writer to take the story and form it, that is the suspense of reading the story (if we knew the ending, we wouldn't read it in the first place). Plus, if the writer is forced to write a different way than their heart wants to, it feels forced and not readable. Looking forward to the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteYOU ARE THE AUTHOR!!!! Not some random reviewer who if they didn't want to read a story the way the author is writing it they shouldn't read it at all! Personally I would have loved to read Edward's POV, I wanna meet the monster again... and yes I did gush on Edward's monster... mmm... Need change your ideas and story plots of someone else and remember even if you are a submissive your the one that holds all the power.
ReplyDeleteI am on the soap box with these other ladies here! I LOVE your story just as it is! As my submissive little hand monkey I command you: "DON'T FUCKING CHANGE A THING ABOUT THIS FUCKING STORY!!, Do you understand me? You may answer!" It's so amazing and if one reviewer doesn't like it, then fuck her! I am glued to my chair neglecting everything else, I dream of this story when I go to bed and I wake up and head straight for the computer! I thought I had OCD (Obsessive Cullen Disorder) but this story just proves it! Please keep going!!
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